From e1b1720cadcf86d281a869c604f5d8e349d48fd8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Frazee <pfrazee@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Dec 2023 16:26:20 -0800
Subject: Tweak the PWI opt-out copy again (#2153)

* Tweak the PWI ot-out copy again

* Update .po files
---
 src/view/screens/Moderation.tsx | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'src/view/screens/Moderation.tsx')

diff --git a/src/view/screens/Moderation.tsx b/src/view/screens/Moderation.tsx
index 947970466..ba6b9d96c 100644
--- a/src/view/screens/Moderation.tsx
+++ b/src/view/screens/Moderation.tsx
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ export function ModerationScreen({}: Props) {
             paddingBottom: 6,
           },
         ]}>
-        <Trans>Logged-out users</Trans>
+        <Trans>Logged-out visibility</Trans>
       </Text>
       <PwiOptOut />
     </CenteredView>
@@ -200,7 +200,9 @@ function PwiOptOut() {
         style={{flexDirection: 'row', alignItems: 'center', paddingRight: 14}}>
         <ToggleButton
           type="default-light"
-          label={_(msg`Limit the visibility of my account to logged-out users`)}
+          label={_(
+            msg`Discourage apps from showing my account to logged-out users`,
+          )}
           labelType="lg"
           isSelected={isOptedOut}
           onPress={canToggle ? onToggleOptOut : undefined}
@@ -218,19 +220,17 @@ function PwiOptOut() {
         }}>
         <Text style={pal.textLight}>
           <Trans>
-            Your profile and posts will not be visible to people visiting the
-            Bluesky app or website without having an account and being logged
-            in.
+            Bluesky will not show your profile and posts to logged-out users.
+            Other apps may not honor this request. This does not make your
+            account private.
           </Trans>
         </Text>
         <Text style={[pal.textLight, {fontWeight: '500'}]}>
           <Trans>
-            Note: Bluesky is an open and public network, and enabling this will
-            not make your profile private or limit the ability of logged in
-            users to see your posts. This setting only limits the visibility of
-            posts on the Bluesky app and website; third-party apps that display
-            Bluesky content may not respect this setting, and could show your
-            content to logged-out users.
+            Note: Bluesky is an open and public network. This setting only
+            limits the visibility of your content on the Bluesky app and
+            website, and other apps may not respect this setting. Your content
+            may still be shown to logged-out users by other apps and websites.
           </Trans>
         </Text>
         <TextLink
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